She was a flower that blossomed; it took a thousand years for that ripe glow to adorn her skin.
God’s creation was never so profound, her contour bore the resemblance of god’s hard work
Partiality will knock on heaven’s gates by her kith and kin.
Was a creation of such an omnipotent stature deserve to reside on god’s green pastures?
Time’s tides did not bear it’s toll on her, life’s surreal moments was never so magnified without her existence.
I suppose the flames of passion had it’s roots in her.
She looked at me comely and blushed; I couldn’t look into her eye for a plebeian was never meant to have such godly pleasures.
I collected enough courage to hold her with my trembling hands.
A touch that was so divine; I had to be careful for she was as gentle as her breath.
I PLUCKED THE BOUGAINVILLAE AND GAVE IT TO THE REASON FOR MY VERY OWN EXISTENCE..
13 comments:
what a line-- 'for she was as gentle as her breath ' !!! fantastic.for me its among the best lines in the history of literature ;)
dude!!!seriously stud man!!
Nice...:)
awh! :).... *wipes a tear from her eye! ...... beautiful!
very enjoyable. And the common understanding is men cant write romantic poetry!
adi!! wht a poem!!! im impressed!! ;)
Really nice adi!! I din know u were such a good poet.!! Nice work.. :)
you dabble in poetry too??? i didnt know..... i'm yet to find something you dont know anything about....
Ha ha. Your far to nice Yulia!
hey very nice adi.. :):)
Hmmm...u seem to know a lot about a lot of things...topping the list would be this piece of romantic poetry..so subtle nd wunderful..u must hve fallen in love for sure, nd never grown out of it...
well lets give u a nickname..maybe adipedia..adi who knows a lot like wikipedia..lolzz....
ISHITA
Ishita? Do i know you?
P.S. Definitely not adipedia.
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